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Nice!
Good job, I like it.
Anemone
Yay!
Um ... I guess it could be my turn now, eh? I shall have to think a bit.
One thought for you, Spare -- I did get slightly entangled during the pronoun tango you had going in the second paragraph. You might want to tighten that up a bit if you get a chance.
-- Thankful Anemone
Sonya Suchei entered the room with much more energy than she had previously exhibited. Her greenish tones were pronounced, and there seemed to be pinkish spots appearing on the fins protruding from her spine. Private Phillips was startled by her hurry, and did not absorb her words the first time she spoke.
"I beg your pardon? What?"
"I said we are leaving. You will not be interviewed by my father at this point." She was methodically searching the room, grabbing certain items and throwing them into a bag. "Pick up your things and follow me. We're taking the shuttle to the station, and hopping from there to my mother's house."
"Um, okay. Is ... everything okay?" He wasn't sure how to read green aliens, but she seemed rather distressed.
She paused, looked at him in what appeared to be a slightly calculating manner, then resumed her scan of the room. "I'll talk to you on the shuttle." She added in an undertone, "although you'll probably have to wait for most of it until my mother talks to you ..."
Phillips's packing procedures were hardly onerous -- he had what was left of his kit, and the clothes on his back, and that was it. Sonya had fitted Artichoke with a small pack which Phillips assumed contained some of that pet's belongings, and she had several bags herself. Another vibrant alien, who seemed to be mostly orange, assisted her with her bags, and Phillips offered to carry another. The shuttle attached to the ship on the opposite side from the sleeping quarters -- which seemed a strange design to him, but he was hardly in a position to criticize space flight arrangements, considering that humans had only just achieved orbit.
The orange-finned alien, whom Sonya had referred to as 'dear' and 'Navigator' in separate addresses, saw them safely onto the shuttle and then returned to the main ship. Phillips felt awkward as they kissed goodbye, then berated himself. I suppose aliens have as much a right to romance as anyone else, he thought wryly. After the doors had closed, Sonya moved to the controls of the small shuttle.
"This is Shuttle QXA, come in ESS Scaira, over." She spoke in a normal tone of voice, directing her attention to the dashboard in front of her.
"This is the Scaira, report, Shuttle QXA, over." A radioed voice replied to her call.
"Scaira, Shuttle QXA now requesting authorization to detach for planet-side docking, over."
"Authorization granted. Safe journey, Shuttle QXA. Over and out."
Phillips heard a small thump and click, saw Sonya bite her lip, and then, after pushing a short sequence of buttons, she turned back to him. Her shoulders slumped, and the rush seemed to be over.
She saw his worried expression, and smiled. "We've not got much to do for a while, now. The shuttle is programmed to the proper descent, and then the planet-side dock computer will bring us the rest of the way in. It will only take about two hours."
As she began to gather the luggage which had been dropped in a heap next to the airlock, Artichoke started snooping around all the edges and corners in the small craft. Phillips had been inside here once, he supposed, although not in a condition to appreciate the furnishings. There were three branching corridors from the 'bridge' of the shuttle, which led to staterooms, a kitchen, and a small lounge area. Sonya had told him that it measured a bare 30 feet by 30 feet from the outside, and had tried to explain some sort of technology which caused the inside to be large than the outside ... however, his blank look must have discouraged that line of conversation. Not that she measured distance in feet -- but one of her basic units was quite close to the same measurement.
After they had finally docked on the planet, and before Phillips had realized that the gravity had remained constant from the ship to the ground, Sonya informed him that they were going to register him as a sentient zoological specimen. While he wasn't exactly accustomed to being referred to as a 'sentient zoological specimen,' that appealed to him more than 'pet,' so he went along with it. They stepped from the shuttle out onto a paved concourse, which was streaming with the most oddly assorted colored fin-people Phillips had ever not seen. There was the occasional even stranger conformity of physical appearance, but for the most part, the major species appeared to be the same as Sonya and the Navigator. Come to think of it, they were the only two 'people' he had seen since his ... well, alien abduction. To be fair, that's pretty much what it was. How cousin Jemima would laugh ...
Ooooh, scary ... Little purple aliens.
Hmm. As opposed to big green aliens.
Anemone