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    I just didn't want Smitty to get too comfortable, so I left Hawthorne hanging for a bit and had Smitty's house raided. Now he's back! ;)
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    Oh so HE was the barefoot one being dragged out? I see... i think.

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    that's what I'm assuming anyway.
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    :D ok ok, I'm just trying to picture smitty with a high pitched squeal.

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    yeah... I know what you mean.
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    WHY does everyone think that they get a break? write! write!  *grabs bull horn*  WRITE!

    ~Drill Sergeant Bree

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    *is sad* I can't yet.

    Oh, wait... I could tweak the rules... after all I AM the one who made them...
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    Yes you could!.. but you still need to tell all of your siblings to write too.

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    I'm not quite sure I understand what is going on in that last post TC.

    Could you explain?
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      CommentAuthorTrenchcoat
    • CommentTimeSep 13th 2009
     
    Smitty's wondering what's going on and why. Apparently, he and Hawthorne went whaling on a bet with a barkeeper. At least, I think that's what happened. :P
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    Oh, ok. I just thought maybe you could show a little better who is thinking it. Because the Smitty is not exactly the subject at the end of the last post. At least I don't think he is...
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    you may write WHENEVER you feel like it Breanna.
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    or anyone else for that matter.
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    yes i am trying to think of something hahah

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    LOl okay D.J i wrote my one and a half sentnce worth

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    YAY! I wrote too! GO TEAM!
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    WOOT!!  i'm confused about hawthorne though..

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    he as been abducted too , but is he at that same place as smitty?

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    I was thinking that he managed to stay un-ubducted hence Fedora's anger.
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    more like he was attacked, but managed to fight off his attackers...
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    Alright this isn't working anymore...
    New rule.
    *clears throat* Ahem!

    Rule #3. A revision, revisitory, revised, revolutionary?... rule #2. ;)

    Anyway. Now you may write again after two posts by other people OR if it has been more than two days since the last post. Which ever comes first. That way the story will go on no matter what! hehe HAHA MwahHAHha ehehhe *squeak*
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    love the squeak

     

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    trust me it was totally unintentional!!!!
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      CommentAuthorTrenchcoat
    • CommentTimeSep 25th 2009
     
    I thought Smitty lived in the country? But Hawthorne's running around in a town?
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    Ya he did! he owned land too! *looks at D.J for explanation*

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    Oh, sorry I must've forgotten that. *sheepish grin* Though I must say, you can hardly blame me seeing as it has been so long since we visited Smitty's place last... Can you?
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    There. Is THAT better?
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    Much

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    :D
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    I just realized something. I mentioned that it was dark when Smitty was forcefully removed from his choice of abode. So what were the chickens doing up?
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      CommentAuthorTrenchcoat
    • CommentTimeOct 1st 2009
     
    From my experience with chickens... they are always up. They must take shifts or something
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    Nope they roost at night. And I don't think that they would roost in the middle of the yard. I'm not saying that it is impossible, but it IS unlikely.
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    Not these chickens.. you may not have known this, but they were actually undercover spies for fedora

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    *long and drawn out* r...i...g..h....t...... it is a well known fact that chickens can't even keep their own pecking order straight, let alone an evil genius's.
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    Just so as I can understand, how exactly were you thinking about this? Are the bricks in a big pile and there is a bit of blood leaking out through gaps in the pile? Or is it just a few bricks and a pool of blood that obviously belonged to someone at some time, but is not just now being used by anyone?

    Curious,
    D.J.
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    well, the bricks aren't in a pile, but kinda strewn  around by the hole in the wall... i was thinking that the blood was pooled just under 'some' bricks and no it's not being used just now, but then, i didn't specify, so i guess that's up to you or the next person to write..

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    OK, thanks! I was just having a hard time picturing it. It makes sense now.
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    haha, yes i guess i wasn't very clear. It was clear to me because i wrote it lol

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    This is simply unacceptable!! Where IS everyone???
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      CommentAuthorTrenchcoat
    • CommentTimeOct 7th 2009
     
    D.J. - Smitty is unconscious. He can't look up at Glouston. :O
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    FINE! I'll just DELETE my beautiful post.... :*(

    There! Now YOU write something!!
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    Yes i agree, write something Trenchy

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    Are you trying to make him out a double agent...? Sneaky...
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    Hmm, that's a good idea.. but I hadn't thought that way. Sounds good to me though!

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    so... I can't quite discern for sure who spoke last. Was it the owner of the husky female voice? Or was it Glouston, in response to the husky female voice?

    Bewildered D.J.
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    I was wondering the same thing..

     

    Confuzzled Bree

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    I meant it to be interpreted either way.  :-)  Somebody has to pick! 

    Tricksy Anemone

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    hmmm I see... well I'm out of time for today, but maybe later I can help remedy this *dramatic pause* situation. *evil chuckle*
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    haha, nicely done TC! Way to write something informative without actually telling us anything. ;) I admire your skill!
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    I'm still confused.. how did Glouston referr to himself in the third person?